Account Name: Crypt96

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Character: Tairus

Change:

Added MP, SP, and Drachma

Spoiler:

Remove "Spoiler:" in profile as quoted

Spoiler:

Bold "Fear of Water," "Short-Tempered," and "Spell Delay" as quoted
Remove "Description:" as quoted

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Spell Changes

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Stat changes

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Sources:
Where am I?

Dragon Training

Journey to Tharsis

A New Face (Open to 1)

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can someone finish this?

DAISUKE~!!!

-Modifications Semi-Completed-

Total of 9SP, 6MP and 570,000 Drachma have been confirmed and added to the profile.
Stats have been changed.
Spoiler have been removed.
Skills & Disciplines have been bold
"Description:" in Spell Delay in Skills & Disciplines Removed.

Ember Hellfire technique added however not available yet therefore stroked in profile for the time being.

Discussion:
Rank of Ember Arrow and Ember First have not been reduced
Technique, Ember Hellfire

For the discussion, is it alright to reduced the rank 5 Ember Arrow and Ember Fist to rank 4?
This is a rare case or at least to me that is so what are the other mod's opinions?

Next, about Ember Hellfire.
Perhaps the incantation should be slightly lengthened.
The Range should most probably be shortened. My suggestion for now would be 15:20:25 instead since I never know when you might add another charge into it incressing the range again.

Speaking of the charge, I've a little suggestion whereby Tairus has to be highly vulnerable during his charge. Anyone up to this suggestion?

yes he is open to attacks while he is charging. i just thought it was obvous. but Tai was always away from battle or only used his first charge when attacking and waits for his opponent to be down or letting others attack the enemy else to go to higher charges...

and Ember Hellfire needs a longer incantation?

i will look up some extensions for the current one... i am sorry if it didnt meet requirements...

and the range is just was i looked up for an average flamethrower in the army so i threw it in. if it need to be shortened then i will think and talk about it with others...

the down grade for the other 2 moves are because Tai had a slight overpowerness and i thought it would be right to downgrade them...

nobody's perfect so lets hear some ways to fix this up a bit! :)

Almost every character on this forum has some sort of overpowered type ability/abilities. I wouldn't worry about downgrading abilities.

ok then. lets keep the spells the same and find ways to fix the move i am trying to add. what needs to be done to fix the move Ember Hellfire which in japanese is translated in many ways but i chose "Enbaherufaia" because it was the easiest to remember. but if extra incantations are needed then i will try to cram some japanese in there...

and maybe to change the ember hellfire rank to 5 aswell would be appreciated. i didnt know i had 16 stat points...

and maybe there are suggestions to the incantation changes:

1. Enbaherufaiabureizu (Ember Hellfire Blaze)
2. Enbaherufaia kogeki (Ember Hellfire Attack)
3. any others you can help me think of and ill translate it to japanese or you can translate by google translate. either/or is fine.

idk how big you guys want it...

Daisuke wrote:

-Modifications Semi-Completed-

Total of 9SP, 6MP and 570,000 Drachma have been confirmed and added to the profile.
Stats have been changed.
Spoiler have been removed.
Skills & Disciplines have been bold
"Description:" in Spell Delay in Skills & Disciplines Removed.

Ember Hellfire technique added however not available yet therefore stroked in profile for the time being.

Discussion:
Rank of Ember Arrow and Ember First have not been reduced
Technique, Ember Hellfire

dramcha not added yet and sources not added! damn im bout to it myself so you wont be bothered and i wont hafta wait...

The incantation is useless anyways but I thought a single word incantation was more for basic spells.

So ya' want Ember Hellfire to Rank 5? Update the first post then.

A rank 5 is overpowered?! It most probably still is even by deranking it... Beside i've sometimes seen a low rank spells sounding more greater than higher rank spells. Its already a mess but seems like we're lazy to fix it up... 'for now'?

Sources and Drachma added anyhow. Somehow I left out the drachma and forgotten the sources was there... I should check all the profiles sooner or later again =="

Will needs to make a Spell Rank Tier.. cause no one knows how powerful a silent, short (one word or up to like five), or full incantation is when compared to each-other.
Like, is a Full (about ten or more words) Incantation Rank 5 Spell beat a No Incantation Rank 6, are they even, about the same, etc. ? No one knows.


btw ~ this post has nothing to do with this topic

the incantation is in japanese and japanese sometimes like to fuse words to make it one. sorta like: wassup or sup being what is up. and stuff like that but japanese do it grammatically correct in their language or other... i saw a 4 word incantation in english to be one big japanese word and "Arrow of fire" or "Fire Arrow" (i forgot which) is "Hi no ya" to make it super short...Ember: "Enba" + Hellfire: "Herufaia" = Enbaherufaia! yay! i could add "-en" to make it Ember Hellfire Blaze: "Enbaherufaia-en".

Anyways no deranking for now and you can still upgrade the rank if you want of Ember Hellfire to 5, just edit your first post like said earlier.

Also, just make up a sort of phrase and use a translator or something to get the incantation.

I still don't understand how your charges work but if possible I'd prefer if you'd only have 1 range in each technique.

Also "Leaves burns on Tairus if the he has below 12 strength." in Ember Hellfire, wasn't neccessary...If you insist to have it, I'll make the conditions for you instead.

i didnt think it would take this long to approve the move and i have used it in the past and i made it burn Tai when he used it like a punishment for using something above rank

Is this done? None of the others seem to be.

it was...

i think the site lost the time it was done... but i revamped my character.

so my moves have changed.

So I can do the modification or...? :P

you you told me to revamp, i took out the old skills and put in new ones... im a char mod so i just did it... ill show you the old and new to compare if you want. but this post was long forgotten. you just revived it from the dead. :3

If you already added the changes to your thread (you're not supposed to but oh well ), then lock it and move it to the finished applications. :P