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 |  Subject: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:04 am | |
| Account Name: ICU ______________________________________________________________________ Name: Akehiko Yuuki Nickname: Akehiko Age: 17 Gender: Female Height: 160 cm (5' 3") Weight: 120 pounds (54 Kg) Group: N/A Reputation: 0 Rank: D Affiliation: Dark Blood-type: - O Likes: Rarity: Akehiko is a very meticulous person. She likes expensive things; things that cannot be bought using simple means. She basks in rarity and will crave the exotic, unnecessary things. She is a collector of many strange artefacts, and will be in-debt to anyone who gives her what she wants. When taking a job offer, she won’t take money as payment. Instead, she will ask for something that she does not yet have or cannot. Games: As a tactician, Akehiko passes the time by endlessly playing chess, board games, and other forms of entertainment that require neurons to do. Her most favourite hobby is playing with people’s emotions. She delights in making people do what she wants, whenever she wants, and how she wants them to do it. If she fails; then she’ll take up the challenge. She likes unexpected reactions to what she does, and the most interesting people to play with, are the ones with a unique way of thinking. Sweets: Believe it or not, Akehiko has a fetish for sweets. Candies, Cakes, Ice Cream, you name it. She often tries her best to control herself around them, but in the end, she comically devours all the sweets she can find. To a point, she transforms into a mean sweet eating machine and it would take more than 2 grown men to catch her. All you sweets out there, you have been warned.
Dislikes: Noise: Akehiko has a very good sense of hearing and so really hates it when people make loud unpleasant noises that irritate her to the bone. She tries to control her temper, but she will attempt to kill you if you don’t heed the 2nd warning. Animals: Being a hunter, she delights in catching and butchering animals, not taking care of them. To her opinion, they are vulgar, nasty, and noisy and above all, dirty. If you give her a puppy, when she gives it back it will be as a pillow of meat and blood, neatly pile up. Of course, it will be twitching. Vulgarity: Akehiko has a very keen sense of beauty, and anything that is not pleasing in her eyes; she usually tries to get rid of. The ugly, the fat, the mundane, the unclean, imperfect; these are some of the things that displeases her eyesight. What truly grates her nerves, are the impure ones. Half Breeds; humans that have bred with Androids, Beasts, and Demons; these are the abominations she truly hates and will stop at nothing to get rid of them.
Fears: Betrayal: Living in a world where trust is a weakness, Akehiko must always be in constant awareness of her surroundings and the people around her. Every move to her is like an attempt to her life. Although she may appear like she is always impassive about anything, deep inside she panics and lives in constant fear that someone might try to take away what’s important to her.
Bugs: There is nothing more in the world more frightening to Akehiko than bugs. Yes, you heard right it's bugs. One might think that as a dark, and ruthless mage, she wouldn't have such a silly fear. But ever since she was a baby, bugs have already made their bad impression on her. She dislikes their slimy, elongated bodies and their mismatched face with bulging eyes.
Physical Description: Underneath those clothes, Akehiko boasts a petit figure with the breast size of a 15 year old in the body of a 12 year old. Yes, it does look a bit premature but it only adds to her facade as male and her innocence. She has a baby face, with the usual expression of a devious person. Her eyes are a light chestnut brown. She used to have long, straight hair, but is now reduced to a short boyish hair. It is colored light red. His skin tone is fair, creasing to slightly tanned. Often mistaken as a tattoo, she bears a birth mark on her left cheek that resembles a star. Magic Keywords: Nit Minite Fin Dervivit Ki or Magic? Magic. Clothing: Akehiko's fashion style are all men's clothing. Preferably; a white buttoned shirt, a black vest, either a tie or ribbon, black pants, and leather shoes. She absolutely wears no jewelry and dresses more like a high class waiter than a woman. Accessories: She has a pocket watch that she clicks to check on time and her schedule. Extra: Despite her Japanese name, Akehiko is a Caucasian who happens to be born in Germany. Picture:- Spoiler:
Personality- Indifference: While many will think that Akehiko's smile actually shows emotion, they are wrong. She can feign it well enough to fool others, but the part of her brain that stimulated anger, sadness, joy and pain died a long time ago. As a result, she is cold, stoic, and ruthless at most times.
- Selfish: Akehiko has a tendency to act spoiled and get what she wants. She is very selfish towards others and has no doubts rejecting someone when asked to give something. She's specially selfish about her collection of rare items and will not let anyone, absolutely anyone to touch them.
- Prideful: Raise by a rich family, Akehiko always has to look neat and proper, as well as act within the decorum of nobility. She can't stand to lose and will get her pride back whenever possible. She will not stand for anyone whom she does not deem worthy of power to stand above her in anything and will use any possible means to dispose of him or her.
History - Spoiler:
Akehiko Yuuki was born in December 6, 1993 in Germany, Berlin. She was the daughter of a maid and the youngest son of the Van der Bloom family, a family with the reputation built on money and lies. Her father, Daniel Vander Bloom, was next in line for the position as the Head of the Family just before his older brother, Nathan Vander Bloom. On the night of the celebration of his brother’s inauguration, Daniel had become very, very drunk. He wanted the position for himself, he was jealous of his brother. Yet, here he was drunk and wasted. A maid saw him, and recognizing him as one the Vander Bloom’s, she helped him to his feet and carried him to his bedroom. There, he kissed her and made love to her.
The next day, everything was back to normal. Daniel, however, had no recollection of anything after he woke up, naked. The maid had left early, knowing that she would be in danger after doing such a prepostorous thing. She handed her resignation and escaped to a lowly village, back to her own family.
There she found herself with a baby, and gave birth 9 months later. The maid, whose name was Akehiko Sora, was of Japanse decent and had migrated to Germany in search of a job. She never thought of having a baby. Nonethless, she grew up healthy, and strong under Sora’s undivided care. She named the baby Yuuki, because she was so gentle and kind. On Yuuki’s 10th birthday, Sora contracted HIV from a rape case and died. Yuuki was now an Orphan. She was put into foster care, where she spent her miserable life escaping bullies and segration. She was an outcast due to her strangness, and the star mark on her cheek which many thought of as a star of David, meaning she was Jewish.
Akehiko Yuuki was put into adoption at the age of 13; a large and wealthy family were searching for a child who had a star mark on his/her cheek. The people at the orphanage were very surprised to see that they had one who fit the image exactly. They asked for a large sum of money, and were glad to get rid of her. The family was none other than the , Van der Bloom family.
Akehiko Yuuki had heard of them through rumors, and none of them were good. She didn’t want to go, in fact, she would take the bullies any day. The woman who picked her up was beautiful, and had the same star mark on her cheek. Many people were waery of her, but they could not talk to her like they did to her. Somehow, she respected this woman.
She introduced herself as Adeleid Vander Bloom, the heiress and companion to the Head. She gracefully took her hand, and led her to the car seat. Akehiko could not help but to admire her beauty, her strength. They drove miles before entering a dark forest. They reached the center, where a large mansion stood eerily amidst the white blanket of snow.
She was introduced to a man, who was seated in a throne aloft a long case of stairs. With him, there was a boy, who did not bear the same mark as him, but had sense of familiarity that he knew her. She was taken to sit on his lap, and introduced himself as Abelardo Vender Bloom and she was the bride to be of his son, Adel Vander Bloom. Adel was glaring at her, but tore his gaze when his father kissed her cheek.
Adel was clearly jealous of Yuuki, but Yuuki did not what he was jealous of. She was treated like trash, just as she was treated back in the orphanage. She attempted to escape many times, and what had been a cozy place she might have liked to call “home” soon turned into a jail place. Lessons started; lessons about Magic. Yuuki still wanted to escape, but they made a deal. She was to learn these lessons, and their deal would be off. She learned the basics of Trapping, Chasing etc. all the skills necessary to become the expert hunters. Her teacher explained that they were like lions, despite the fact that the male governed, it was the women who hunted and kept the family alive. They were predators.
Whilst practicing, she was assaulted by none other than Adel, and by accident she killed him with her new found knowledge. Both Adeleid and Abelardo were devastated, however, they found Yuuki to be a much better son than Adel and they transformed her.
Class: Hunter The Hunter is a class that mixes the traits of other peculiar classes: the stealth of a Ninja, the accuracy of a Gunner, the flexibility of an Onmyoudo and the endurance of a Cleric. Yes, the Hunter class can either be magical or purely a combat class. For this reason, the Hunter class is considered the “Jack-of-all-trades”. Hunters have ones sole purpose: capturing their pray. They debilitating the slowly with a wide range of spells and catching them either alive; after all a dead catch is nothing to boast. They can shift from long range, to close range fighting and have no qualms about adapting to their surroundings. As much as this class sounds so glorious, there are some drawbacks that you have to be aware of. One, the Hunter class carries no physical prowess as they believe that to engage the pray head on is like facing death itself. Therefore, in physical combat, they would surely loose. It also carries on some of the weakness of the traits it shares with the classes such as being physically weak (Ninja and Cleric). Non-magical Hunters are very expensive in their use of traps and explosives (Gunners). Magical Hunters rely too much on their spells and higher spells carry higher stakes than weaker ones (Omnyoudo). Weaponry/Equipment:- Dual Pistols:
Name: Beretta PX4 Storm Type: Double Action Weight unloaded: 780-800 g Length: 193 mm Barrel length: 102 mm Shot Capcity: 17/17 rounds. Reload Time: 2 post Description: The Beretta PX4 Storm is a semi-automatic pistol manufactured by Beretta of Italy and intended for personal defense and law enforcement use. These two handguns were passed down to Akehiko by his father before he died.
Stats – 45 Strength: 1 Accuracy: 12 Endurance: 10 Speed:12 Intelligence:10 Stat Points Earned: 0|0 Jewels Earned: 500,000 Sources:Skills & Disciplines: Tactician: Although very weak in physical activity, Yuu-sama boasts in mind games and skilful escapades that make up for her lack of strength and laziness. She is very knowledgeable on the works of the mind, and has no guilt exploiting it. However, she’s not the best among skilful planners, because everything she knows about the world came from her family. Politician: Likewise, in the everyday life of the nobility; charisma and diplomacy are a must. Having been born and brought up in the political world, Yuu-sama has become a professional when dealing with arguments, discussions, debates to an extent where he can get himself out of trouble with a few words. Though it is not much of skill, it does become very useful in dangerous situations. An added bonus is the ability to lie through his teeth, which he is very good at, and the ability to see through lies and parlor tricks of any sort. Magic Name: Wilde Jagde Magic Type: Seal/Trap Magic Magic Description: Click Here!TP/KP Earned: 0|0 Techniques: 10/10 Atem Gangart: Aufruhr (Breathless Pace: Storm) - (2) Type: Support/Defensive Incantation: Gefangen im Sturm – Lit. " Caught on the storm“ Range: Supplementary Effect: Aufruhr is a technique that allows the user to control the road of the winds to the user’s will. In effect, the seal created has the ability to “push” whatever is caught, to a distance of 3-4 meters. The seal works like an augmented fan, and can only affect in a straight line of sight. it can be suspended on air and on any surface as long as it is with in the boundary of his arms’ reach. In other words, the user can only conjure the seal from its person, using his/her hands as a medium. Once the seal is conjured, it will stay stationary unless moved by the user’s hands. At this point, the quantity of seals created before recharging is 2 posts. The cool down for this technique is 1 post. The seals will immediately disappear, the post after it was summoned. Feuer Gangart: Sturz (Crimson Walk: Collapse) - (5) Type: Offensive Incantation: Fühlen Sie sich den Zorn – Lit. " Feel the Wrath“ Range: Mid/Long (About 60 meters in circumference) Effect: Sturz is an offensive spell similar to a mini landmine. The user of this technique is capable of setting up red-colored seals that explode by his command, “Verzicht”- which means “ to Release ”. The seals can be placed and conjured on any kind of surface, but it must have a surface. The seals are circular and can fit a single grown man. Once activated, the seal will flash once revealing itself and the next second it explodes. To activate it, the user must be able to see the seal. The explosion has the radius of 2.5 meters, and the aftershock of 0.3 meters. Anything caught in the blast, will suffer from average to bad injuries. But the explosion can never kill, even if you are caught in the midst. The number of seals that can be created before recharging is 4. Cool down for this technique is 3 posts. If the traps aren’t activated within 2 posts, they will self-destruct. The seals can be created by the user’s contact through the skin; any part of the body will do, but usually, feet and/or hands are the best mediums. They can be placed anywhere within range. Erde Gangart: Rastern (Grounded Path: Scan) - (3) Type: Offensive Incantation: Suchen Sie in der Welt – Lit. " Search the World“ Range: Mid-Range Effect: Rastern is a spell that requires immediate contact with the ground. Without it, the spell is rendered useless. A light brown seal appears below the user’s feet and sends echolocation waves that register everything and anything that’s touching the ground. This gives a very distinct mental image and geographical knowledge about the area and those who are in it. Once activated, the user must remain in contact with the ground/surface to sustain the scan. The maximum range of this technique is 30 feet in radius. The layout of the background is basic, and all signs of life appear as dots and are unidentifiable as anything else but living creatures and/or magic. Buff: + 3 Accuracy. Duration: 3 posts. Recharge: 2 posts.
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| | | | dorianodet
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:26 am | |
| Your ability are quite interresting, and it's a nice presentation. You must just remember that to use them continuously, you'll have to get endurance.
The explosing seal won't do "high" damage, as it's done it can at most do average damage (having 4 at the same time etc...)
The earth seal can't boost your accuracy so much if it already is a great sensor spell.
I don't know how large 30 feet is in meter through. |
| | | | ICU
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:52 pm | |
| - dorianodet wrote:
- Your ability are quite interresting, and it's a nice presentation. You must just remember that to use them continuously, you'll have to get endurance.
The explosing seal won't do "high" damage, as it's done it can at most do average damage (having 4 at the same time etc...)
The earth seal can't boost your accuracy so much if it already is a great sensor spell.
I don't know how large 30 feet is in meter through. Um thank you!  I worked hard on creating the magic. I did all you asked, and it is done. Oh, and 30 feet in meters is roughly about 9 meters. |
| | | | Jukensong
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:40 pm | |
| Claps*
This dude/gal is awesome.
:D
I'm rping with you ^^ |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:45 pm | |
| Okay, it's fine with me 1/2, a really good character template. Just remember in your first upgrade to up your strengh a little, because with 1 of strengh, the recoil of your gun would be able to make you fall currently. Since you're just starting, we'll ignore it (a lot of new character tend to ignore the stat to some extent anyways) but to be more fair, try to build up at least a little bit of strengh later (not so much, just enough to for your charac to have the average human strengh ) |
| | | | ICU
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:00 pm | |
| - Quote :
- Claps*
This dude/gal is awesome.
:D
I'm rping with you ^^
Hahaha thanks ^^
Look forward to rping with you!! - Quote :
- Okay, it's fine with me 1/2, a really good character template.
Just remember in your first upgrade to up your strengh a little, because with 1 of strengh, the recoil of your gun would be able to make you fall currently. Since you're just starting, we'll ignore it (a lot of new character tend to ignore the stat to some extent anyways) but to be more fair, try to build up at least a little bit of strengh later (not so much, just enough to for your charac to have the average human strengh Cat ) Yup, I'll try to reach the avarage human capacity to shoot a gun. The recoil when I Rp should be funny Oh yeah, hold that approval!! I still gotta finish my history and my personality. |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:06 pm | |
| Oh, my bad, I through I had already look into the spoiler, I didn't remember they were empty.
No problem, you can take your time, the most difficult part is already done, now it's up to your imagination. |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:19 am | |
| - ICU wrote:
Tactician: Although very weak in physical activity, Yuu-sama boasts in mind games and skilful escapades that make up for her lack of strength and laziness. She is very knowledgeable on the works of the mind, and has about 52% success rate of predicting the opponent’s next move. However, she’s not the best among skilful planners, because everything she knows about the world came from her family. That is a coin flip to dodge.. any attack ~ |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:38 am | |
| Uh... might I suggest you put your maic description in the magicology section and simply provide a link to it? |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:03 am | |
| Nice character ICU. Can't wait to RP with her. |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:23 am | |
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| | | | dorianodet
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:31 am | |
| I've read it, but anticipating the attack don't mean you'll dodge hit anyways. |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:09 am | |
| - dorianodet wrote:
- I've read it, but anticipating the attack don't mean you'll dodge hit anyways.
Tee hee, that's right. So I don't have to change it right? Phew. I finished Personality, now I just have to get on with history.  |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:10 am | |
| Wait, where does it say she/he can anticipate hits? |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:13 am | |
| - ICU wrote:
Tactician: Although very weak in physical activity, Yuu-sama boasts in mind games and skilful escapades that make up for her lack of strength and laziness. She is very knowledgeable on the works of the mind, and has about 52% success rate of predicting the opponent’s next move. However, she’s not the best among skilful planners, because everything she knows about the world came from her family.
Um... here it is Will!!
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:18 am | |
| Thanks. Personally, that's fine, but tactician stuff is more of a "war" based trait, as in group battles, thinking out plans and stuff. It's a bit too much to include things like predicting someones next move, considering people can just "BS" their way out of it and cause problems... |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:25 am | |
| Huh, okay. First, what's BS? |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:26 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:46 am | |
| lol okay... I shall reword my sentences! |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:23 am | |
| Might be a hard opponent but good efforts on the character application.
So since there's not much problem with this massively detailed application so,
2/2 Approval.
Any problems left? |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:42 am | |
| Sorry, no. I find the skills and discs too large and stuff.
I find the skills & disciplines which are supposed to be small quirks to your characters way too varying. You honestly don't need to speak about how weak your character is, as it's defined in your stats, not skills & discs. For tactician, being good at mind games, skillful escapes and all that is fine, but what's that got to with predicting someone's movements?
Charisma's good though, as that is actually a quirk. |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:59 am | |
| Um... okay! I actually removed the "anticipating other's moves" part since people found it too troublesome. I'm not gonna argue about it; only because I want to RP xD
William, are you asking me shorten something? In such case, what would that be? |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Fri Feb 18, 2011 11:05 am | |
| 1/2 approval from me now, as long as you do your history and personality... |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:39 am | |
| I'll give my other 1/2 as well once this is done ~ |
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| | Subject: Re: Akehiko Yuuki (WIP) Sat Feb 19, 2011 11:34 am | |
| Thread closed and moved to the appropriate section. |
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