Sorry, got the idea and had to go with it. Besides, I like the idea of this character better than the new Jess.
Account Name: JKDragon
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Name: Marie Clariens
Nickname: N/A
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Height: 4'
Weight: 100 lbs.
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Neutral
Blood-type: B
Likes: Money, manipulating people
Dislikes: Getting in trouble with the law
Fears: Running out of money
Physical Description: Marie is a small girl, with fair skin, long straight green hair, and big blue eyes. There is something about her that seems completely innocent yet also scary.
Magic Keywords: Ana est bona.
Ki or Magic? Magic
Clothing: Marie wears a pleated black mini-skirt and short grey sleeveless shirt, as well as a tiny white thick fur vest. To add contrast she wears heavy steel-toed boots and green fingerless gloves the same shade as her hair.
Accessories: Two bracelets and one heavy necklace, all of them silver with inlaid jade and emerald.
Picture: N/A

Personality
Marie basically takes advantage of people assumptions that people are innocent, playing all sorts of tricks to steal people's money. It is her own greed and jealousy that fuels this behavior, and has become all she does in her spare time besides shopping. There is one redeeming quality of hers though, and that's taht she cannot stand to see someone injured or dying. Then she rushes into action, doing what is nessacary to save them. Still she is slow to trust people and make friends.

History
Marie grew up poor, always jealous of the rich girls who got everything they wanted. She studied magic mostly on her own, but from time to time got a bit of help from her father. Then one day she hatched a brilliant plan - tricking one of the rich girls into leaving her money unguarded. Since then Marie has done dozens if not hundreds of similar stunts, earning money with which she goes on shopping sprees. It used to be for her family not her, but Marie became greedy.

Class Magical Duelist

Weaponry/Equipment Her bracelets, which form force field bucklers upon command.

Stats – 40
Strength: 5
Accuracy: 10
Endurance: 10
Speed: 10
Intelligence: 5

Stat Points Earned: 0|5
Jewels Earned: 500,000

Sources:
https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/t321p165-everlast-school-destruction-sign-up - 3 SP and 3 MP
https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/t765-lost-in-the-graveyard-al-flashback-pm-both-to-join - 2 Sp and 2 MP

Skills & Disciplines:
Telling Falsehoods - Marie is quite skilled at telling a good lie.
Behavior Analysis - Marie can assess a persons behavior patterns well enough to figure out how to distract them.

Magic Name: Destruction Magic
Magic Type: Supplementary
Magic Description: This type of magic breaks stuff - weapons and other equipment. It has no effect on living beings.
TP/KP Earned: 0|5
Techniques: 15/15

Ignition - Rank 1
Type: Supplementary
Incantation: Ana est bona flamare.
Range: 1-3 feet
Effect: A spark is sent at the object which Marie points to, catching any unattended flammable materials on fire.

Break Electronics - Rank 1
Type: Supplementary
Incantation: Ana est bona sundere boltare.
Range: Touch, which she must maintain for ten seconds
Efect: Any simple electronic item Marie points to ceases to function, broken beyond use.

Disarm Weapon - Rank 5
Type: Supplementary
Incantation: Ana est bona sundere armare.
Range: 1-3 feet
Effect: Any weapon Marie points to suddenly and inexplicably slips out of the users grasp.

Cross Bash - Rank 3
Type: Defensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Melee
Effect: By crossing the force sheild bucklers before she bashes an opponent Marie can knock the opponent back a considerable distance.

Break Weapon - Rank 5
Type: Supplementary
Incantation: Ana est bona sundere armare vix.
Range: 1-3 feet
Effect: Any unattended weapon Marie points to breaks beyond repair. Works best with more complex weapons.

Is this a character or NPC? I mean, you can't have two characters per account. You:

1. Posted on an account that already has a playable character pending.

2. The account name has the same account name as another playable character.

Make it so that she actually has to touch the objects in question for 10 seconds before they break. Also cloths can't be lit on fire at that rank.

Edited Al... and just put JKD in the inactive section, this is my new PC!

Honestly, wasting your old threads is an extremely silly idea, but if you want to.

So, approval then?

1/2 approval.

Break Weapon - Rank 5
Type: Supplementary
Incantation: Ana est bona sundere armare.
Range: 1-3 feet
Effect: Any weapon Marie points to suddenly and inexplicably breaks.


I have a problem with this...

Being able to break the opponent weapon is kinda broken.

I know. I saw it, but I'd allow it towards NPC's. Just not PC's, since that's unfair and if they paid 900,000,000 Drachma for a weapon and she broke it? Yeah, no. That's not happening. So it's fine as long as it's not PC's.

This way it's fine, but try not overusing it against NPC that would probably be heavy armored if the rank is too low okay?

And expand the personality plz. You need WAY more than two lines. Like 2-3 paragraphs minimum

Maybe we should change it to disarming. Like, knock it out of their hands?

Edited. Marie has one redeeming quality after all!

Omg! Marie and Ayra should be BFFs!!

Kairu-kyun wrote:

Omg! Marie and Ayra should be BFFs!!

I KNOW RIGHT

Uhm... Approval guys?

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"Jess's chararacters *name here* are all independant and protect innocents from evil. They always like strong *instert boy name here*. They all hate Ayra."

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They all hate Ayra.

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hate Ayra.

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hate Ayra.

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hate Ayra.

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hate Ayra.

Sorry William, but I decided for a radical change. >> Marie might just be willing to get along with Ayra if Ayra will help her steal.

Yeah. Steal your boyfriend.

Uhm... No, not like that. Please just approve her already, someone!

1/2 approval from me~!

Willaim already 1/2 approved so technically it's 2/2 ^^

2/2 approval.