Account Name: Jukensong
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Character: Sifler, Darren

His summon's stats now
Strength- 2
Accuracy- 3
Endurance- 10
Speed- 7
Intelligence- 3

Techniques of the pudding dragon.

Buffer - Rank 4
Type- Defensive
Incantation-- N/A
Range- 25m
Description- Acting as a buffer Albert gets between an attack and Darren he is forms into a mound of dirt between Darren and the attack. Higher ranks increases the range Albert protects and how much damage is mitigated.

Change:
+1 Strength
+1 accuracy
+4 endurance
+4 speed

2 Pistols /w extended clips, red dot sights, and detachable suppressors :D

Name: Beretta 96 Pistols
Description: A full sized handgun. Effective range anything within 50m. Uses regular rounds

Spoiler:

1 Semi-Automatic Rifle /w ACOG scope, and detachable suppressors

Name: Beretta Cx4 Storm
Description- A blow back action rifle. Effective from 15m- 880m. Uses regular rounds

Spoiler:

And lastly 1 bag that I can stuff all my weapons and junk in, it can be magical w/e.

I'll take any price for em as long as it's reasonable

New Skill

Gun Enthusiast
The character just likes playing with guns so he/she doesn't really know anything about them besides aiming and shooting well enough to be used in combat. Since the bullets he/she uses isn't in anyway magic related it's damage can be negligible depending on the person's passive defense, unless he gets a nice shot in. Reload is average at best and bordering on slow when it comes to dual wielding or when being pressured

EDIT MOVES
For my 1st skill Vortex change the description for me please

Vortex - Rank 5
Type: Support/Affliction
Incantation: Innocent Rage take shape! Envelop the area!
Range: 5-10 meters around him
Effect: Wind pressure going in every direction disrupting everything around him. Uses it to slow and push opponents in the vortex to the ground while people outside away. Also used to help Darren dart in and out in his attacks when they are in the vortex, making it seem he's riding the wind during the duration. Powerful Mages are still able to move around but not as freely as they want.

Al pointed out I didn't put in that Darren glides with the wind in the attack so i put that there.

Decent Pudding Dragon - Rank 4
Type- Summon
Incantation- Innocent Rage take Shape! Pudding Dragon!
Range- 25m
Description- A dragon whelping summon made out of dirt. Used almost exclusively for defense helping get in the way of blows in dragon form or appearing as a huge dirt mound on at the site of impact. Can use it's claws and teeth to attack others but again is mostly focused on defending it's master. Summoning him will have the summon by his side unless dismissed or out of magical energies. However if it's damaged enough Darren has to dismiss it so that it can replenish it's magical energies to help defend him more efficiently. He has four pac abs now.

Replace rank 2 pudding dragon plz


NEW MOVES

Stealth - Rank 3
Type: Support
Incantation: Untold Malice take form! Veiled Murder...
Range: Himself and anyone within arm's reach
Effect: Using the darker dragoon magics Darren covers himself with shadows. At this rank he's hidden from most automatic or basic sensing magics as he is hidden.

Wind Magic Preparation - Rank 3
Type: Passive/Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Anything near his blades or something his blades just touched recently
Effect: With his blades enhanced by wind magic Darren has an edge with it in combat. The wind magic can be made to increase the reach of his attack by 1 foot, makes the attack sharper depending on the length the wind magic Darren is willing it to be. Also if Darren gets a successful attack depending on the severity/deep the attack with just a thought or notion from Darren he can cause the wind magic stuck inside the enemy to be released. At this rank the cuts from the wind magic just results in many small cuts in the intended area or a long thin clean cut at the most.

Sources:
Most Basic Defense +2 SP, +2 MP, and 145,000 Drachma
Training his New Pupil +1 SP, +1 MP, 75,000Drachma
An Unknown Rift +2 SP, +1 MP and 220,000 Drachma
Stranded in a New World +3 SP, +2 MP and 310,000 Drachma
Out Camping +2 SP, +2 MP and 130,000 Drachma

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10/10 SP (Gained/Used)
8/8 MP (Gained/Used)

I'll let William decide about the price, but remember than getting a mordern weapon will cost you a lot.

I don't see the change you've operated over your spell what have you used your 6/6 PM for?

Please give do something of the following format to make it easier for me and others to understand the guns abilities/positives/negatives.

*Name*
*Description*
*Picture*

Bump.

Your preparation spell can't have both wind and poison effect, you need to make separated spell.

Your stealth will prevent you from being sensed by low level sensor, but not from eyes.

Your pudding dragon need to have a endurance score if it's only used to defense, and a full template if you used it to attack to, with.

The "glinde on the wind" will still be limited for a rank 5 spell.

The gun are fine now, if the damage output isn't too high.

Alrighty I separated the twin preparation I'll add in poisons later, when I can.

I'll add in the hides from sight part later also, he's a decent sneaker without it so far.

Um what would a rank 4 endurance score be? I really don't use it to attack

The gliding is part being limited is fine, it's understandable.

Guns for show, blades for pro's

Any other things I should tweak?

Rank 4 - 25 SP & 4 TP

With a summon, you can get a thing this strong.

If I were you, I would do a part at the end of your first topic with the pudding dragon template and ability.

Kk thanks

"If I were you, I would do a part at the end of your first topic with the pudding template and ability" I didn't get what you were saying but I'll move the template to the front? That's what I'm hearing.

It's good, just precise the range of your pudding dragon spell and it will be good (I will count the point after this since I haven't do it yet)

Kk and done

thank you for the help as usual

Just need william to decide the price for the gun.

There's no point in nerfing damage since people can start out with a normal handgun, but whatever.

Gun #1: 100,000 Drachma

Gun #2: 250,000 Drachma

Very fair It's fine with me :D

If nobody take the time to do it, I'll make the calcul and paste it tomorow :)

/hug?

I've end up all then copy/paste.

next time put all the link of your "source part" with what you've get next to.

i've also take the time to correct your profile page by adding all the source of your precedent update too

Now all done