Account Name: Alberio

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Character: Mortimer C. Graves

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Umbrae Militis - (5)
Type: Offensive/utilitarian
Incantation: Phasmatis umbra , exorior in vultus quod EGO electus ut tutela quod vindex. Pareo meus to order quod evinco mei hostilis , umbra miles militis!
Range: 20 meters
Effect: Summons a number of spirits into temporary shadow familiars which can be manipulated by the user at will. Each one is the size of a normal human, will dissipate if struck with force equal to their rank in magic power or a normal attack 3* their rank. The number and strength of the soldiers is dependent on the amount of magic used in their creation and the amount of shadow available at the time. However the total number which can be created is equal to that of the spells level. Each casting lasts for the two following posts.

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Umbrae Militis Sniper - (6)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: Phasmatis umbra, exorior in vultus quod EGO electus ut tutela quod vindex. Pareo meus quod evinco mei hostilis, umbra miles militis!- Moderu Sniper
Range: 10 meters
Effect: A total number of sniper shadows will be summoned equal to half the techniques rank. The sniper models are half-meter spheres with small heads and stubby clawed arms and legs. A meter-long barrel extends out from the center of the sphere. It is capable of firing converged saggitta maggica bolts with a force equal to half this techniques rank from this barrel. Each one is capable of “floating” equal to its speed. The following are its stats
Strength: 4
Accuracy: 16
Endurance: 4
Speed:11

Umbrae Militis Shield - (6)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: Phasmatis umbra, exorior in vultus quod EGO electus ut tutela quod vindex. Pareo meus quod evinco mei hostilis, umbra miles militis!- Moderu Shield
Range: 10 meters
Effect: A total number of shield shadows will be summoned equal to half the techniques rank. The shield models are a meter and a half tall with human-ish bodies and bulky limbs. Flat and angled surfaces cover its limbs and torso providing it an extra level of protection. It is capable of emitting a deflectio barrier with a strength equal to half this techniques rank. The following are its stats
Strength: 4
Accuracy: 4
Endurance: 16
Speed:11

Umbrae Militis Assault - (6)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: Phasmatis umbra, exorior in vultus quod EGO electus ut tutela quod vindex. Pareo meus quod evinco mei hostilis, umbra miles militis!- Moderu Assault
Range: 10 meters
Effect: A total number of sniper shadows will be summoned equal to half the techniques rank. The assault models are of general human build but seem to be wearing black cloaks which obscure the. Its hands and feet appear as black metallic claws. The following are its stats
Strength: 11
Accuracy: 11
Endurance: 11
Speed: 11

Over The Top - (8)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: Umbrae/Fulgoris/Glacies/Vente
Range: 3 meters
Effect: Utilizing massive amounts of magical power in low level spells, the caster is capable of creating effects well over the top of the normal limits. At the casters current level, they are capable of utilizing this technique with four different elemental spells, creating an uncontrollable burst of these spells directly in a three by three meter area. For example, a shadow spell or light spell would create a mass of luminous or obscuring material while an wind or fire spell would create a torrential area of elemental turbulance. Currently the caster may create darkness, lightning, ice and wind.

Liberatio - (7)
Type: Personal
Incantation: Liberatio
Range: Personal
Effect: A simple spell which unleashes the stat boosting capabilities of a "sealed" weapon altering its form in the process. The stat boost lasts a number of posts equal to the spells rank and gives a total boost equal to twice the spells rank.

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Shundo – (6)
Type: Utility
Incantation: N/A
Range: 15 meters max
Effect: By sending magical energy beneath himself, Mortimer is capable of launching himself at intense speeds between two unobstructed points, almost instantaneously. As he moves, he leaves after images from the point he was previously standing in. He is now capable of using this technique in mid air but can only travel in straight lines with it. It is possible to predict where he will travel and so intercept him before hand.

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Techs should read 72 out of 79

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I think it's fine, but I'm not sure to have understood about the liberation part :

Liberatio - (7)
Type: Personal
Incantation: Liberatio
Range: Personal
Effect: A simple spell which unleashes the stat boosting capabilities of a "sealed" weapon altering its form in the process. The stat boost lasts a number of posts equal to the spells rank and gives a total boost equal to twice the spells rank.

Meaning you change the form of your actual weapon during 7 post, and get 14 on the stat you want? I'm not against but is it this?



Concerning Over the top : Could you write down the element you're able to use? Moreover, I understand this is a raw burst of power, but if I read you want it to do more damage that a rank 8 spell, and to balanced it suffer from a range limitation.
I think a CD wouldn't be too bad since you're releasing a lot of energy at once (not something incredible through, like 1-2post just saying that it's impossible to be spammable ^^)


Correct me if I'm wrong :)

I don't think Liberatio is a stat boost. Larita and Sai didn't do it as that. Though I'm not sure about Pyoh.

Seems fine to me, just explain what the 4 elements are in Over The Top.
If not mistaken, I am guessing it's Shadow, Light, Glacier, Wind?

Put which elements I could use in over the top. But mostly I'm just trying to amp the most basic spells into something which could be potentially useful at higher levels.

From what Sai has said, liberatio is the technique used to unleash a given weapon. Once the weapon is unlseashed it conveys a stat boost. I plan on putting the weapon in on my next modification (which will probably be around the time this one is finished).

I'm breaking my modificaton into three parts so next time I'm gonna be buying stuff... k?

Ok, so Liberatio will be linked to the weapon you'll buy? Fine by me so. But still, try to put a brief summary of the element you can use with Over the top because I really don't understand where you're going with it.

I did, read the last sentence.

Ops, sorry. Didn't see. I think everyone is Ok with it, i'll edit your profile. (If Will isn't ok I keep a copy of what it is currently, just in case ^^)

edit : Hop It's done

They look fine by me, but I'm not great with techniques.

Please make a new post when you say a modification is done and thanks Nhieling. Please lock and move threads to the "Completed Modifications" section after you're done with them.