Account Name: Eva
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Character: Eva

Change:

+8 to Speed

New Techniques.

Overdrive - (3)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: 20 meters
Effect: One of Eva's few close ranged skills. It allows her to lay down heavy amounts of fire upon multiple (Or a single target) using only her sidearms, it is one of her more lethal skills.

Warp Shot - (4)
Type: Offensive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Anywhere in her line of sight
Effect: Allows Eva to create a rift, where she then fires her weapon through, which then allows her to make an exit rift wherever she pleases (As long as it is 1.5 meters from any solid object), making longer shots possible, these rifts are far to small to allow anything else to pass through. At this rank she can't shoot through Barriers.


Sources:

https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/magic-world-f6/defending-shrine-t179-150.htm

5 SP, 3 KP

https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/magic-world-f6/an-unlikely-saviour-t318-30.htm

3 SP, 2 KP

https://negimalostmagic.rpg-board.net/magic-world-f6/lone-ranger-training-t202.htm

2 KP

I'm a little iffy on warp shot allowing you to shoot at anyone in your line of sight from any angle... Will, other mods what do you guys think?

Since this can be more of less a sure kill,a limit to the number of times you can use it should be good,probably less than the rank of the attack.

Well I can limit it, that makes sense.

Okay Eva, what do you guys think is a fair number of times she should be able to do it?

You know, looking at Warp Shot, I think quite a few spells, as long as they're smaller than an arrow, could fit through the exit portal and be sent at Eva through the attackers portal and hit them. Also, you can open portals from the other side of walls, barriers and such, that makes it pretty broken.

Actually Will, the portal closes after it is used, quite quickly, so it only really has time for an arrow or whatever to go through. And, no she can't. She can only open a portal where she can see. So, if there is a wall in the way, she can't make a portal behind it.

Well the main problems I see with it are that she can look at you, fire an arrow and it comes out right next to your head, or in the exact place in the armor where an arrow can get through or something. Perhaps we could do something to make the ability a little less hax, cause as it seems it's essentially "I fire an unmissable shot which you can't defend against.

How about you make it so that you haven't mastered the technique yet and can't make portals with exact precission. Maybe you could make it so that the portal can only appear in empty space, so there has to be at least a 1 meter radius from it to any other solid substance. Or maybe the portals don't appear exactly where you want them to so they form in approxomately a 1 meter radius of where you want them to, allowing for a miss chance (though the arrow would still go in the same general direction).

Also, another problem may be that when you use this technique a person can't attack you back, so maybe the portals have a delayed close time and persist for about 1 second after something passes through them. Yes this could be abused to send small objects back and forth but isn't that worth having a chance to counter attack? What do you guys think of these possible weaknesses/ drawbacks that can be added to make the technique fair?

You can see through barriers, and as Alberio said, it's literally an 'unavoidable' attack. I think it should start out with like 3 meters from any object and slowly that amount decreases depending on the rank, I'd approve of it. I mean, at rank 15, you could have the 'anywhere' stuff.

I agree wif termz and conditions. Edited : D

okay it looks good to me but I'm not going to approve it without a second opinion. You guys think it's fair?

Sure. It's all good.

Okay then.

The modification has been accepted and therefore this thread is closed.

Fail Eva... Please add your Drachma next to your links that you earned. :l

Edit: I updated it.