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Ryo

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PostSubject: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptySun Oct 31, 2010 4:25 am

Account Name: Sai
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Name: Saijun
Nickname: Sai
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9''
Weight: 65 kg
Group: N/A
Reputation: 0
Rank: D
Affiliation: Neutral
Blood-type: AB-
Likes: Word puzzles, various kinds of music and magical research (Particularly into his own branch of magic.)
Dislikes: Doesn't dislike anything in particular
Fears: Hurting any of his friends or loved ones while under the influence of his magic.

Physical Description:
Magic Keywords: Liberatio
Ki or Magic? Magic
Clothing: Sai is usually seen wearing a black jacket, with a white shirt underneath. Sometimes a black tie loosely tied around his neck. Black pants are usually what he is seen with held up by a dark leather belt, his weapons are usually held on this belt, or concealed in various places.

Accessories: N/A

Extra: N/A

Picture:
Spoiler:

Personality

Sai is quite a neutral person, not usually outgoingly happy or in a state of depression. He very rarely looses his temper or shouts at someone. Very loyal to those that prove themselves to him (Or friends, for short ). Though, using his magic too much has been shown to make him bloodthirsty and violent. Usually seeing him in this state usually makes people fear him.

History

To be established!!

Class

Soul Sealer

Weaponry/Equipment

Sai has the ability to make his own magical weapons with which he uses his magic with. So far he has two weapons.

His longsword -

Quote :

Stat Increase -

+14 Strength

Liberatio form -

A clawed gauntlet, which covers his right arm with a light but strong armor.

Tanto -

Quote :


Stat Increase -

+14 Speed

Liberatio form -

A hidden blade on his left arm, has a mechanical system to retract and then extend the blade out from a container on his wrist. (Think Assassin's Creed)

Shadow Bow -

Quote :

And a bow

Stat increase -

+14 to accuracy

Liberatio form -

Shotgun

Larita's Magic Coin: Created from Larita Rimuru's magic, it's use is currently unknown.

Stats – 67
Strength: 10 (+14 when longsword is wielded)(+12 when liberatio is released)
Accuracy: 5 (+ 14 when shadow bow is wielded)
Endurance: 12
Speed: 20 (+14 when tanto is wielded)
Intelligence: 20

Stat Points Earned: 0|27
Jewels Earned: 2,210,000

Sources:


Skills & Disciplines:

Sai is quite skilled at utilising a blade, particularly his own. He has his own style of fighting which consists of quick but strong strikes to cripple his opponent.


  • Regeneration Ritual
    Sai's clan has a rather complex ritual that is used to help the process of healing for those with otherwise life threatening injuries. To do so, the ritual will use a powerful sealing spell that will leave their bodies alive, barely, to heal them. If a substantial injury (Such as potent poison and such) they will be sealed into a sort of spirit realm. Where a physical manifestation of their spirit will be made into a sword, or other weapon, and is then bound to a single person for the duration. This person will meet them in their dreams, or in deep meditation. But the two will be able to speak to each other at any time.

    While in this form, the wielder may use the 'Liberatio' incantation to release the spirit into their original state. For a duration until either they are 'killed' (Since they are immortal for the time being) or either they or the wielder or the spirit call themselves back into their normal state. If a situation arises where the wielder is incapacitated, the spirit can release themselves, but, in doing so will cause them to be unable to be released for a few days at the least.

    While in this form, magic has no effect on them, but physical attacks can still incapacitate them for the duration of their release, as long as the attack is Ki based, regular attacks will seemingly pass through them.

    The wielder won't be encumbered as they would with a normal sword, so even if the size is large they could wield it as if they were using a shorter sword. At any time the sword may be summoned if needed.


Name: Saijun
Number: XVII (18)
Title: Perplexor Anima (Blank Soul)
Virtus: Spes (Hope)
Directio: Centrum (Center)
Tonus: Album (White)
Astralitas: Pluton (Pluto)
Artifact: Memoria Sagum (Memory Cloak)
Artifact Information: Sai's artifact takes the form of a small white cloak that covers his chest. With his artifact, he can cause the cloak to glow and anyone who sees this glow, he will be able to erase his existence from their memories as if they never saw him.

Magic Name: Animus Signum (Soul sealing)
Magic Type: Offensive/Supportive
Magic Description: A more detailed guide to the magic itself

An ancient clan of mages created a specialised form of magic that utilises pure magical energy to create weapons, armor or even trinkets with varying degree's of power. Though, using this magic too much can create something of a darker side of the person, depending on who it may be. Sai becomes quite unrelenting and bloodthirsty.
TP/KP Earned: 0|8
Techniques: (20|23)

(Signum-(Seal)) - (7)
Type: Defensive/Supportive
Incantation: N/A
Range: Personal
Effect: This spell is the basis of most of the magic that Sai uses, it allows him to seal any sort of magic into a physical form. He can seal any type of magic as long as it isn't to powerful for this spells rank.

Currently Sai can seal Rank 4 spells according to the formula = (Signum Rank/2)+1

Signum Telum – (Seal Weapon)) - (7)
Type: Personal
Incantation: Unknown
Range: Personal
Effect: This allows Sai to seal magic into the form of weapons. These weapons give small bonuses to stats, but only when they are released. The bonus is determined by the rank of this spell, each weapon gives bonuses when weilded. Currently, each can give +10.

The amount of weapons is also limited by the rank of this spell. (He can give away weapons, but these are no longer bound to him, so they don't count towards this maximum)

It takes Sai 2 posts to create a weapon with this spell. Currently it is impossible to do with distractions (I.E in a battle)

Liberatio – (Release)) - (7)
Type: Personal
Incantation: Liberatio
Range: Personal
Effect: A simple spell that serves two purposes, releasing magic stored in items that Sai has sealed, or, releasing a weapon that he has sealed. When in this form, he gains a stat increase which can total at the rank of this spell times 2.

Currently he gets

+ 12 to strength

He can also leave these released weapons for a duration (In posts) equal to the rank of this spell multiplied by two

Current amount of posts before Sai's release form reverts 8, according to the forumla = Liberatio rank *2

The amount of posts before he becomes unrelenting and bloodthirsty is decided by either my discretion or forced after the amount of posts determined by the formula = Posts allowed*0.75 rounded down.

Currently = 6 posts.


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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptySun Oct 31, 2010 5:11 am

You must state how long the bonus stats go for. Also, instead of having it being able to seal anything of lower rank, you should have the forumla...

[[Rank Move/2]+1.]

It's good and not broken. While, it may seem like it extremely lowers it, the stats may go up in return.

Lastly, how much posts does it take to create a weapon, please state that.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptySun Oct 31, 2010 11:21 am

Fix...d?
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptySun Oct 31, 2010 12:53 pm

1/2 approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptySun Oct 31, 2010 1:00 pm

Congrats, your character is approved!

Your old character has been deleted... Please enjoy the new system.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptySun Nov 07, 2010 12:13 pm

For balancing purposes, your character has been unapproved until further notice. A +15 power up is too much, look at Leila's buffing as an example. You can still role-play, but just do not use your spell: Signum Telum as it is extremely broken. You cannot change the stats you distribute into it, therefore there shall be no forumla for it and instead, you will say what stats are increased.

Also, the max stat boosts at rank 2 is only 4. So distribute 4 stat points as a bonus to using the spell.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 6:05 am

Fix'd
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 7:28 am

You must say that to use a weapon and keep the stats active, it drains your magical power. This is so a +30 in stats would not be broken, as you could only keep it active for like 2 posts, if you used all 3 weapons at once.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 7:35 am

That isn't logical as the weapon is made from his own magic power, so it wouldn't drain him of energy just to use the thing. And, he can't use more than two at a time, and he can't use the bow with anything because that just wouldn't make sense x.x.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 7:53 am

Okay then. But, no telekenisis... Reapproved.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 7:53 am

Yay
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyWed Nov 17, 2010 6:34 am

Holy crap! this is broken beyond belief.... Rank 4 produce +8 in strength? swords and bows give you +10? since when?
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyWed Nov 17, 2010 8:48 am

All buffing spells have double their rank in giving a bonus. So a rank 5 spell gives +10 to distribute amongst your stats.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyWed Nov 17, 2010 2:43 pm

Thats broken too. so my Rank 8 Buff spell give me 16 points? you dont think that's broken in the slightest? i say Buffs give their EXACT stat rank, even to my buffs
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyWed Nov 17, 2010 11:57 pm

16 buff points isn't that broken, see, whenever you get a buff post of 16, you don't just "put it on someone", you continually use up your magic to use any buffs on yourself on anyone else.
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyThu Nov 18, 2010 12:20 am

No thats still really broken, if it continually uses magical power, the buff should wear off... (-1 every other post
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PostSubject: Re: Sai, Updated!!   Sai, Updated!! EmptyFri Nov 19, 2010 8:02 am

Unfortunately, all my magic is based on the fact he releases magical energy that he had stored at an earlier time. And, I don't have any buff spells. They are just magic weapons that give stat increases. : D
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