brenden96
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 |  Subject: Idoru Koreidon (U mad bro?) Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:03 pm | |
| Account Name: brenden96
Name: Idoru Koreidon Nickname: Ido, Ru-ru, Don Age: 17 Gender: Male Height: 5 feet 10 inches Weight: 130 lbs (About 60kg) Group: N/A Reputation: 0 Rank: D Affiliation: Light Blood-type: O-Positive Likes: Any kind of food. Fighting. Dislikes: Losing friends, death, losing. Fears: To be alone. Physical Description: Idoru has a well-shaped body. He's quite muscular despite his age. His body helps him in the lines of speed and stamina, but mainly strength. He tends to look less though than his body shows with clothes on, making people think strangely of him. His face on the other hand contradicts his body, it seems rather gentle and he's smiling for a great deal of the day. His eyes are tainted with a grey-blue colour and are quite large compared to others. Also, Idoru has a double iris in his eyes. - Double Iris pic:
The double iris makes his eye colour split up. The outer side of the eye had a faint fiery/orange colour while the inner side of the eye has a bright Crimson-red colour to it. He's got a rather rough pair of lips due to being beaten up alot in the past, they seem hardened. Ido's hair isn't all too fancy. It's all fuzzy and spread across the top of his head, or rather as they say 'bed-hair'. His hair's got a smooth crimson-red colour and most of it is kept up by the headband he wears all the time. His nose is balanced. It's not too wide, not too long or short, not too big. His neck isn't short yet not exactly long. It has a normal length for his age but you can see that it's a little muscled up and the veins being thicker around his neck. His shoulders are rather skinny but then again in a muscular way. They are in balance with his arms and look natural. His body build overall is also muscular, his arms are his best aspect due to him channeling his magic through them. His legs have been trained for granting high dashing speeds and he's also got an amazing amount of endurance/stamina. A six-pack's there, too! Magic Keywords: "Gods In The Heaven, Aid Me" Ki or Magic? Magic Clothing: Any sorts of clothing. Wears many coloured clothes in combination with green or black colours. Wears T-shirts sometimes and ofcourse a pair of pants and shoes! Sometimes he wears shorts depending on the weather each day. Has a headband/hairband around his head with a mixture of sea-blue colours and black wave-like patterns, which fits his hairstyle quite well. He also has a Blue coloured mantle with a flame-like white pattern at the bottom on all the time, it's like a signature clothing piece of him. A couple of his old friends will recognise him due to this mantle. Wears an open jacket mainly and has a white scarf on. Accessories: A ring with the shape of a dragon and a necklace with beads across. One for each year of his age. - Magatama:
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Personality Idoru is a really outgoing boy and tends to do what he wants to, and has a strong determination to complete those things. Always tends to complete his tasks and goals. Most of the time he's happy, but that's just a fake image. On the inside, or whenever he's alone, he's rather sad because he doesn't have friends or doesn't make any for a reason. "I want to become stronger.. Stronger, so that I can love and protect those I love.." This is his true intention. He lacks the strength to protect what he loves which some can notice quite well. He wants to become a strong magician, too, for that reason. That is why he wishes to obtain Dragon Slayer magic, to be able to protect. He's a gentle and sometimes easy-going and relaxing guy. When early hours strike, he's quite lazy and tired, but tends to fire himself up and get ready for the day. Near the evening he's himself. If he would ever get to the point of having friends, Ido would be the one that loves and protects thim with all he's got. If one were to hurt his friends, he would murder. He likes kind and gentle persons to start with, and would love to meet a mage like himself. Like a twin, that way they would be best friends and both had the strength to protect.. Around girls, he's like a hopeless idiot. Afterall, he's only met one girl as a friend before, and that took him a year to get used to. He tends to come over shy when he talks with girls or even such that he likes, and forgets about his main objectives of the day on that very moment. Starting a conversation on the other hand is not one of the best things he could do. When it's guys he talks to, it's a different story. Idoru mostly looks for a fight when he talks with guys, like the bullies in his past that he had fought. One good male friend is all he needs, one that's not a jack-off or a jerk, or like mostly one with a big mouth, either. Times will come in which people he meets will laugh at his intentions, such as becoming a dragon slayer, and also turning into one of the strongest mages ever seen. He would respond with : "I'll show you what I'm worth of! I'll become the strongest mage, and then I'll kick your asses!" with a bit of blushing and a red head. History - History, kind of.:
Chapter One : Birth Of The Magician
It was a normal day. A simple one in wich the sun shone from the sky down upon the surface of the planet in Magnolia. A woman were to give birth, but there was only one doctor to aid her.. The birth itsself went fluently, although her health was not. She had died upon giving birth, to a boy. The doctor was surprised as the woman had already asked Before the birth for him to take care of the baby. Frowning, the doctor took a look at the baby boy and rose a smile. He had set up the burial for his mother and he himself named this baby : Idoru! The family name was kept from his Mother, considering the father was unknown, which was Koreidon. This was the day that a normal boy, Idoru Kureidon, was born which would end up as a magician in the far future. The doctor had no choise to but to raise Idoru, thus he had done so. He thaught him the ethics of life, how to be polite and kind towards others, to stay away from suspicious and strange persons.. How to live, and stay healthy, to eat but not to be gluttonous. All of these sorts he was thaught by the doctor, but that didn't take all too long. Six years later, Idoru had to live further on his own, because the doctor had vanished, most likely having passed away. Idoru walked around the park as a normal child, but when the evening stroke and the parents came to pick up their childs, Idoru was saddened and frowned each time he saw them together, those families. He had never had an actual "Family" to start with, and friendship didn't look all too well either.
Chapter Two : Becoming Friends?
Idoru kept being consistent and determinated that he'd become friends with Someone. But on the other hand, he was the one that got beat up and bullied around all day.. It made him angry, but he wasn't strong enough to defend himself, either. Each day after day, and when their parents came they acted like innocent and normal kids. Idoru tried confronting the parents but they wouldn't believe a 'stray' child. The parents all looked at him as if he were a wild animal to be doomed. On one day, a new child appeared in the park all of a sudden. It was a girl, she looked gentle and sweet, and approached Ido as the other kids and the bullies kept their distance. Ido rose his head and looked at the girl, thinking what she wanted from him. The girl happily asked him : "Hey, want to be my friend?" And ofcourse Ido aggreed and said Yes. This was his very first friend in almost a year around the park. They talked everyday and nobody else interfered. They were best friends, yet her parents insisted on not being such with Idoru. Two years passed again, and Ido had grown up some strength and muscle. Although he was only Nine you could see that he had trained, somewhat. It was another normal day, like the one of his birth. Sunny, with a slight breeze and the smell of sakura flowers. Anna, his best friend, approached him and told him something which wasn't Good news, but rather bad. She said that she had to move out, to another town due to the work of their parents, and that she had to stick to them and the guild they were going to, also. Idoru frowned and asked her to stay, but that was not an option. His only friend was lost now, and the depths of despair reached him.. The usual life from 2 years ago continued thus : Being beaten up everyday, although this time he kept a fight and defended himself. He decided to grow stronger, so that he could love and protect those which he loved..
Chapter Three : Discovering Magic
Idoru was at the age of Thirteen already. He was interested in general things such as the mages and guilds in Magnolia, and even went to a random guild, asking if he was allowed to join. Ofcourse, he wasn't a mage himself and got kicked out of every spot he asked at. Ido was angry, and pledged that he would become one of the greatest mages you could ever imagine. This ofcourse was going to take even more work than the trainings he performed daily. He started reading books to gain more knowledge and asked a mage he encountered on the streets to train him. Rarely enough, this mage wanted to and answered with a Yes. He was glad and excited that this man would train him into the arts of magic! The first weeks were to find out his element, which ended up being Fire. The mage also beared the element of fire and would find it easier to train Ido this way. It took months and the results were showing off. Ido could use magic, like a true mage! He was a natural talent, which most wouldn't have expect, nor the mage that trained him. After half a year, the mage took his leave with the following words "You must grow stronger, Kid.. But, I can't aid you in that. Become strong, on your own!" Ido waved the man out as he left Magnolia, and that was when he immediatly continued his trainings. Both magic and physically.
Chapter Four : I Must Become Stronger!
Many years had again passed. Idoru was Sixteen already, and had completed the mastery of his magic style. This is where the story continues
Class Magical Duelist Weaponry/Equipment Bokuto - A wooden practice sword with a blade that reaches the length of 4 foot. Stats – 45 Strength: 10 Accuracy: 10 Endurance: 10 Speed: 10 Intelligence: 5 Stat Points Earned: 0|0 Jewels Earned: 500,000 Sources: None Skills & Disciplines:Talented Magician: This person is fairly good with magic, and knows how to handle his spells. Martial Arts: Idoru has trained many kinds of martial arts such as Boxing and Wing Chun Magic Name: Emperor Of Flames (Fire, NO REALLY?) Magic Type: Elemental Manipulation, Offensive Magic Description: Idoru is a talented magician and can do various things with magic such as manipulating flames nearby him and using them against his opponent. He can also counter other flame spells used against him. Mainly, he conjures flames for powerfull spells or meelee attacks. TP/KP Earned: 0|0 Techniques: 10/10 Furious Flames - (5) Type: Offensive Incantation: "That which a dragon is said to be made of, that which a dragon brings forth. Fly high, like a true dragon, and destroy everything on your path." Range: Long (20 metres) Effect: Ido uses his magic to shape a dragon of flames, then shoots it forward to his opponent. The dragon can also curve around and move freely in any way, aiming for it's target. Revenant - (5) Type: Offensive Incantation: “Flames of the revenant, aid me in battle, bring forth your furious flames and incinerate everyone before you!” Range: Long (20 metres) Effect: Ido gathers his magical power and flames, as he creates a big fireball. After the incantation is complete and the fireball is shot, it splits up into 10 small rays of fire.
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JKDragon
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| | Subject: Re: Idoru Koreidon (U mad bro?) Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:15 pm | |
| Specify range by feet or meters please. Use my characters as examples... Also. Another fire mage?! WTF?
Why is fire such a popular element around here. |
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brenden96
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| | Subject: Edit Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:18 pm | |
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Umibouzu
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| | Subject: Re: Idoru Koreidon (U mad bro?) Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:15 pm | |
| Nope, one more user to add to the RP.
I would say use some more fire spells from Negima, which are actually useful, but whatever, its good . Except for the Ranges. Rank 5 wont even get you close to 40 meters.
Thats called constructive criticism, which is what you should do to get someone approved, remember it... |
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brenden96
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| | Subject: Edit Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:47 pm | |
| Edited. Do not bring personal issues out here, you're a mod after all. |
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Umibouzu
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| | Subject: Re: Idoru Koreidon (U mad bro?) Thu Aug 04, 2011 6:15 pm | |
| As long as you conduct yourself with a calm accepting manner, then youre being a good mod.
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JKDragon
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| | Subject: Re: Idoru Koreidon (U mad bro?) Thu Aug 04, 2011 7:11 pm | |
| 2/2. I'mma lock and move it now! |
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